Many people think that important things in life are mostly free or can’t be bought. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.

Many believe that the things which are of great importance to people do not have a cost. I completely disagree with this statement and think otherwise.

Firstly, it is important to understand that humans have varied preferences based on their personalities. If one desires love probably another one would prefer a fancy car. Now, the first-person who values love and affection have probably no cost to bear, especially when it comes from the parents or siblings because that is natural. However, it can not be generalized and apply to everyone, as it can be seen from the preference of the other person in the example who wants to have an exotic car and that comes with a price. Hence, saying that the primary things of interest are free for everyone do not fit with the above scenario.

Secondly, meaning and understanding of most valued things are different for rich and poor. The underprivileged would rate filling his stomach with needed calories to survive higher, than the affection and belongingness and that comes with a cost. Whereas, a rich child who stops the mother from going to the office because he wants to spend more time with her, that again has its’ cost because she must choose between the amount of money that she is letting go for spending the time with her offspring.

In conclusion, generalizing this statement over the mass that most important things for everyone are free would not do justice because individuals have different preferences needs in different situations, and not all valuable and important things are free of charge.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and that humans have varied preference. If one desires love probably other one wou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98054474708 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68559736251 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560311284047 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1418868974 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.363636364 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238069815611 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964850040911 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724818339067 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172929205648 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801160490576 0.056905535591 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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