Many people think that regions affect successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to?
In today's world,people are motivated to push boundaries and explore better opportunities either nearby or faraway places.I believe a person's success doesn't depend upon their native region.This essay goes with the complete disagreement and puts forward arguments in support of that.
Achieving success in life depends on many factors such as hard work,sincerity,determination,clear vision of goals and ambitions.Support of family and friends also plays an important role in achieving the same.Being in a good and cohesive environment is for sure beneficial,however a person who is determined and disciplined to achieve their goals,will break any barrier.
A surrounding or an environment where you are leaving also plays most important role.Sometime it may happen that an individual have to come out from their comfort zone to meet what they want.One has to go out and look out for the possibilities in other places.There are plenty of facilities now a days and advanced techniques available which helps a person to become successful irrespective of their region.
Another aspect in favour of this argument is that success means earning a respectable position and a secured future which can only be attained by sheer hard work and dedication.There are people who have proved that native region doesn't come into the picture when it comes to become a successful person.Few example are Bill Gates,APJ Abdul Kalam,Ratan Tata,Narayan Murthy,Azim Premji and list goes on.
All above names didn't get success on the basis of their region but their so strong determination , hard work, good intention and efforts to improve themselves continuously has paid well and made them the person today they are.Basic fundamental will stay static and identical to achieve success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, well, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45255474453 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5753536495 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664233576642 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1887206088 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 298.8 106.682146367 280% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.8 20.7667163134 264% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.8 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218630878502 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120458843585 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367849827824 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120458843585 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367849827824 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.6 13.0946893788 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.21 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.22 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.