Many people today are choosing to live and work in another country after graduating from university in their home country. Why is this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Moving abroad after university education is becoming increasingly popular. There are certainly some benefits for those who decide to do so. Nevertheless, there are some possible drawbacks associated with this trend. I believe that the negative effects in home countries are too serious to justify the positive aspects on the individual level.
People immigrate to developed countries for various reasons, the most important of which might be related to the better quality of life, and broadened horizons. With regard to the former, most of the foreign countries have warmer climates, advanced healthcare systems and more job opportunities, which make these countries a better place to live. The opportunity to meet people from different cultural backgrounds and to learn a foreign language might be another factor for youngsters to settle overseas as well as making them more rounded as a person.
Despite having the above-mentioned advantages, there are some adverse implications in relation to the shortage of skilled workers and the loss of young talent. As people move overseas, their home countries lose their brightest and most dynamic citizens. Not only would this affect the economy of any nation, but it would also affect future generations. Finally, this potential effect in various fields of science and that of medicine would restrict the overall development of any nation, thus making the matter worst.
In conclusion, although there are definitely some compelling reasons and benefits in terms of personal growth to move abroad, I personally think that the national-level disadvantages of losing potential citizens are more severe to support the possible advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54054054054 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89096128662 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6129014998 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.583333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203132587885 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678003526974 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055513315252 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102864274055 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486173123166 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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