Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
In this era of global connectivity international sporting events are gaining huge popularity. many people believe hosting a global sporting event brings many benefits than drawbacks. I find this topic contentious and will elucidate with relevant examples and finally conclude it with my opinion.
First and foremost it a matter of great pride for any country to host a global tournament as it provides visibility to the host country on a global map but additionally also brings plethora of business and employment opportunities. To elucidate further in the recent past many smaller nations like Bangladesh, Singapore and Srilanka hosted major sporting events like football and cricket world cup which helped in creating new jobs in hospitality sector. additionally it also aided in generating revenue which was further used for the development of that nation.
Secondly on the other hand hosting international sporting events also puts a country under a lot of pressure as the government needs to make sure of the security arrangement for the tourists as well as players from other countries. A lapse in the security can bring a negative outlook for that country which further impacts the future hosting prospects. In the recent past Srilankan team was attacked by terrorists when they visited pakistan for an international cricket series thus affecting the prospects of pakistan to host any international matches for nearly a decade. this further impacted there cricket Association as they could not generate any revenue from the domestic market.
To sum up it is evident that though there are some drawbacks for hosting global sporting events but the benefits clearly offset the downside thus in my opinion international sporting events brings many advantages which are better for the growth and development of that nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, look, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34948096886 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86947404576 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543252595156 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8976027687 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.545454545 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324768555197 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133253680381 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114072519972 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221556012688 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710582443017 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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