Many people like to wear fashionable clothes.
Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
No doubt, in this era fashion industry has been transformed dramatically. Wearing branded, stylish and trendy clothes have become vital for the majority of people. We are conditioned from childhood to ‘Dress to Impress’ Fashion has an impact on our personality first and subsequently our lives.
Fashion has impacted every age group of male and female. But still, female’s passion for being fashionable and stylish is incomparable. For females, fashion is an economic and social status symbol. Every Woman tries to look different on different occasions to grab the attention. No doubt Fashion should be unique to every individual, but Media has played a very influential role in creating fashion styles.
Unfortunately, in the last thirty years, the fashion industry has been completely focused on profitability and quality has become a secondary objective for them. The production of the finest merchandise is no longer their main objective. The focus has shifted from what the product is to what the product represents. To achieve this, They splashing the logo on everything from handbags to bikinis. The product itself is not in the spotlight anymore except it is the brand that speaks.
A good friend of mine who belongs to the middle class and works on an ordinary job spends almost eighty percent of his monthly salary on the wardrobe shopping and following fashion trends. Another friend of mine realized after the end of his adolescent life that following fashion trends is such a waste of time and money and he is left with no savings.
One should always wear comfortable outfits that shine their personality. We should not waste our money on buying latest designer's suits just because others are doing so.
Hereafter, I would say that the brand and fashion consciousness is conveying undesirable influence on the economics of the layman, damaging not only the culture but also the traditional values of any society.
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- Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case?Is this a good thing or a bad thing?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 84
- Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 84
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, still, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2101910828 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85609669446 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605095541401 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8716963776 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8888888889 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05555555556 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126732572851 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380921995123 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261733005739 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577852933386 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235632524507 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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