Many people like to wear fashionable clothes Why do you think this is the case Is this good thing or a bad thing

Grammar and spelling errors:
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In contemporary Era  ,a majority of people are fond of trendy...
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In contemporary Era  ,a majority of people are fond of trendy ...
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... trend is increasing day by day due to a  number of factors. In my opinion,followi...
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...e to a  number of factors. In my opinion,following this is a good practice.    To start ...
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...on,following this is a good practice.    To start with,a number of people wear fa...
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...s is a good practice.    To start with,a number of people wear fashionable outfi...
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...elegant and unique in their peers group.This boosts their confidence not only in the...
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...nds circle but also in any social event.It is observed that individuals are influe...
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...ince people love to wear trendy apparels ,they are aware of their physics;and in o...
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...utine that is a positive development.     Furthermore  a decent  attire reflects t...
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... positive development.     Furthermore  a decent  attire reflects the personalit...
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...development.     Furthermore  a decent  attire reflects the personality, status ...
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...tus as well as character of individuals.They are judged by others looking at their o...
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...tation that is an important character of  a personality to survive in modern socie...
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...onality to survive in modern society.         Inspite of having the positive impacts,t...
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...  Inspite of having the positive impacts,this trend also has negative ones.For instan...
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...pacts,this trend also has negative ones.For instance,it is quite commonly seen that...
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...rend also has negative ones.For instance,it is quite commonly seen that many people...
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... who cannot afford the expensive branded  dresses buy these by hook or crook that ...
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...nd disrupt their budget consequently.    To conclude, I think this is a good prac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, well, for instance, i think, as well as, in my opinion, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24714828897 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02304086001 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6463878327 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.514988373 49.4020404114 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.333333333 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2222222222 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1111111111 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152990618652 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732528241634 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605461988803 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963540690639 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662238883093 0.056905535591 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.