Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?
Working domains a large part of our lives. We barely have time for social, leisure activities to recharge ourselves which may cause more issues than the benefit we receive from long working hours.
For one thing, long working hours may cause physical problem, harming our daily life or even causing death. Many officer or computer engineer sit in front of the screen a few hours without standing or moving their body for a little time, resulting in sore back or stiff neck which may lead to chronic medical problems in the future. Moreover, long sitting habit lead to obesity diseases such a diabetes or heart attack which are highest proportion of death. Those critical issues can be tackled by just taking some short activities during a long working day.
Beside, the stress due to long working hours attack us mentally. Too much work have you feel stressful and tired. Sometimes, it is easier to solve a problem when people are fresh. One can come up more ideas or technical methods to obtain a solution. But when consistent working may keep the brain from working functionally. In return, it cause working anxiety. Under this pressure for some time, one may have depression or more harmful mental diseases. Everyone needs some time to recharge the brain and keep it dynamic.
In conclusion, working is a significant part of our lives, however, long working hours without leisure activities do harm our bodies in some degree. Those cirtical issues can be tackled by just taking some short activities, such as stretching, during a long working day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun officer seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many officers'.
Suggestion: Many officers
...g our daily life or even causing death. Many officer or computer engineer sit in front of th...
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Line 2, column 425, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the highest'.
Suggestion: are the highest
...ses such a diebet or heart attack which are highest proportion of death. Those critical iss...
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Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...rom working functionally. In return, it cause working anxiety. Under this pressure fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92748091603 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39959801326 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583969465649 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1984423374 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6875 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314320496112 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966934341381 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597825193553 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196774992122 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431756263108 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.