Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities.Does this situation has more advantages or more disadvantages ?

People are getting habituated spending more time working rather than having some leisure activities. They keep on missing many precious moments while running behind the work with thought of getting early success and wealth. In my opinion, committed to the job that someone is doing is important, but making time to do some spare activities is more important to keep the person happy and healthy. extensive hours

The biggest advantages of doing some free time activities with family and friends is that it gives you immense motivation to go back to work the next time. Nobody wants to work without a purpose, and setting some goals for your family or may be sometimes for yourself gives the push to achieve them. For example, after a trip to a island for couple of days recently makes rejuvenated me and my family. One should not for to spent quality time on their day to day life while working for extensive hours.

Working for long hours sometimes if required to meet the job target, but should not be a habit. People spend long hours in office and takes more work load to keep their supervisor happy and sometimes achieving the next promotion in a short time. For example, marketing employees mainly work on target basis, the sooner they reach the point the better to for the them. But it is being observed that still employee haunts for extra miles, leaving behind all the time they could have spend for some leisure activities like going out with family, enjoying with friends etc. Driving yourself behind the goals is good, but make sure that your goals are not driving you back.

In conclusion, working for extra hours may be good in some situation but do not sacrifice your personal time for the shake of it. Have enough time to spend for yourself, family and friends to keep yourself joyful and moving. Hereby I believe that spending more hours in workplace and less for other activities has some advantages but can not override the number of disadvantages.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hours'' or 'hour's'?
Suggestion: hours'; hour's
...es. People with abnormally high working hours comes home late after office and gets t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, i feel, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08282208589 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63324754305 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518404907975 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4689188547 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.466666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268851478435 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100471223451 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769534529243 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178559460315 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686458504939 0.056905535591 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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