In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this?
It is proverbial, a well-known fact that there is no empty land left in the urban areas for construction companies to develop new properties. Let me give a brief description of the current scenario below.
City of New York is thriving in the global race in constructing skyscrapers for new offices and housing. The city also has a myriad of industries which attract immigrants from all disciplines who are seeking employment here. This is the causation for new property developments in the outskirts as the demand for new housing complexes had risen. Peoples controversy with the developers is that they should protect the environment in the villages and not to build new homes there. I opinionated that it is ok for retired families to enjoy the calm countryside and moreover, it is cheaper to afford a new home there. To think rationally, no employee or a business man can transit everyday from a village; similarly, new corporates cannot be established in villages just because professionals are residing there as operating businesses in villages is expensive due to lack of infrastructure.
The panacea, solution for all problems arising from lack of residential spaces: develop new townships in the outskirts, strengthen the transport infrastructures so that everyone can travel to and fro to the commercial centres easily from their residences and incorporate new companies and business units at a close range to the new developing residential complexes so that there will be zero unemployment.
In conclusion, my opinions from the above is to develop small residential zones along with small economic zones in the outskirts which in turn will help the economy to expand further.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 678, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... employee or a business man can transit everyday from a village; similarly, new corporat...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, similarly, so, then, well, as for, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13761441867 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586080586081 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.2145472079 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.8 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229356297313 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101877718422 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937554582667 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1095038432 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100544130305 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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