In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this?
The population in recent period has grown manifold as compared to earlier. This is leading to requirements of new homes in country side with the space in cities already being saturated. We will see why it is important to create houses in the country side to cater to these growing needs.
Building structures in country side does lead to a lot of environmental issues. As the space is used for creation of concrete blocks, the flaura and fauna of surroundings gets negatively impacted. A whole lot of plant and tree species are lost due to exploitation of natural resources and changes in soil structure. Many animals are also drifted further inside to territories unknown to them leading ultimately to early deaths and reduction in their numbers. It may lead to a situation where the only places to visit natural beauty will be in artificially created gardens and to view animals will be in animal parks.
Even though there are above issues, but we cannot deny the fact that there is not enough space in the currently developed cities to accommodate more people. Creating more vertical buildings will only choke the towns leading to more traffic jams, increased property prices and taxes. This will not only make it more difficult for citizens to survive because of financial crunch, but also impact their health due to higher pollution and wastage in limited amount of area. The expansion of industrial and housing complexes to undeveloped areas will also help the people of these areas to flourish with jobs and benefit from the access of better technology at cheaper rates.
This essay discussed what are the problems which arise on building homes in country side but why it is also a necessity in current times to actually do that. In my opinion, we should expand horizontally to outer places even with its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 199, Rule ID: WHOLE_LOT[1]
Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: lot
...urroundings gets negatively impacted. A whole lot of plant and tree species are lost due ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90938511327 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59839314279 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4814239705 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.357142857 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183782057221 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565965146469 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500164936182 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105814535501 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211507183755 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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