There are people who argue that cities are crowded and the only way to grow space is to build homes in the suburbs while others opine that we need to safe guard the outskirts of the city. I completely agree that we need to sustain the culture and diversity of the suburbs.
Firstly, the food that we consume is grown in the countryside. Farmers have been cultivating food and cattle in these places for many decades. It is important to maintain these food zones as if we fall short of cultivable land, there is not any alternative. For instance, taking the current rate at which the population is growing, the scientists found that we would be short of 30% of farm land by next decade. Consequently, we would not be able to meet the needs of urban as well as rural population. Additionally, overcrowding these areas would subject them to hiked air and water pollution. As a result, the quality of the food produced degrades which in turn effects the quality of life.
Secondly, the suburbs are known to be peaceful and ecological places. With the advent of urban population, these places will no longer be habitat for different animal species. For instance, we no longer see birds that chirp, and animals that live in harmony with the humans in the cosmopolitan cities as they are nothing but concrete jungles. Consequently, building homes in the rural areas pose a greater risk to the biodiversity of these places.
In conclusion, we should uphold the diversity and ecology of the suburbs and not disturb them with urbanization. Given the situation, if we preserve the countryside, we would be able to feed the urban life.
- In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion? 61
- Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79078014184 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69825535535 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539007092199 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3578553205 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119413693174 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412729606012 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480864333172 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765995636693 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362665274601 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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