In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this?
increasing population has developed concerns regarding new settlements. some believe that new homes must be built in the countryside, while I disagree with this opinion.
To begin with, there are people who think that the increasing demand for accommodation can be responded by extensive buildings around the cities. By taking this action, density of apartments in city centre is reduced, since population is settled in a large area. this can prevent congestion and traffic related problems. apart from this, citizens are also provided with variety of choices for their living place offered with wide range of price for sale or rental. So, people with lower income can afford a house that they like for living in by selecting a location that is farther from the central areas and therefore, cheaper.
However, I opine that construction in the countryside must be forbidden for some reasons. The first and foremost, in order to build new apartments plenty of trees are cut off and the green belt around cities is completely ruined. this threatens the environment and endangers life of the species that inhabit in these areas. Not only this, green belt protects towns from natural disasters such as flood. Moreover, it is proved to have a essential role in ventilation and oxygen out bringing through photosynthesis. As a result of its disappearance, the level of air pollution and occurrence of floods may consequently increase.
To conclude, although some believe that new constructions must include countrysides, I think that the environment around the cities should carefully be saved. I hope that everyone understands the importance of protecting the flora and its influence on individuals life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, apart from, i think, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29411764706 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92362409599 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628676470588 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9706671259 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236926096262 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703561393512 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647457071575 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148203964948 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635613381995 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.