In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?
With the growth of population, the demand for accommodation is inevitably increasing in metropolises. Since little amount of free space is accessible for construction in these cities, arguments have come up regarding whether the lands of rural areas should be developed to meet this demand or they have to be preserved. However, I believe that development of the countryside should be carried out as long as it is compatible with the environment.
From an environmental point of view, the idea of urbanization of rural areas could be denied for its devastating effects on natural resources. Obviously, settlement of people in the countryside is not limited to building houses, but it also requires providing basic amenities such as construction of roads, power lines, and water supply. Performing these construction operations may result in irreparable environmental damage such as soil erosion and water pollution, to name but a few. Although these concerns appear to be reasonable, in my view, modern urbanization is not necessarily accompanied by pollution and destruction.
Building new homes in the countryside is considered to be an applicable remedy for the challenging issue of overcrowding in big cities. However, in order to minimize negative environmental damage, eco-friendly materials and techniques could be applied. Due to recent innovations in construction industry, the possibility of properly dispose of waste produced during the process, as well as using renewable plant materials like bamboo has been provided for builders. In this way, we tend to make a balance between the environment and development, which means that not only the nature of rural areas would be preserved but also the housing demand could be met.
To conclude, whereas the expansion of urbanization may cause some adverse effects on the environment, I believe that it is indispensable to address the issue of accommodating individuals in big cities. This could be achieved by using sustainable methods and materials during the whole process of development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, regarding, so, well, whereas, such as, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46540880503 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28606572031 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575471698113 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7804626306 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.692307692 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121758178789 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044635982843 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557739795856 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711243417841 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269338185966 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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