In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion?
Houses are one of the necessities of human life. In most of the countries, many people require houses to live but there are no space to build one. People think that they can build new houses out side the cities. But some of them argue that the countryside should be secured from building houses. This essay will discuss the views before giving the opinion.
In one hand, many cities are filled with lot of buildings and due to high population there is no space for building new houses. Hence, people started taking over the countryside. Building houses at the countryside could move certain amount of population from cities to the rural areas and also develops the area widely. For instance, companies and industries will be established when many people occupy rural areas. Therefore, there would be tremendous job opportunities available for the people. Thus, the remote areas could be developed to a new level.
On the other hand, people at the countryside fear that construction of buildings such as houses, companies and industries could destroy their lifestyle. They feel that such establishments could pollute the area. Their intention is to protect the environment around them. Just imagine how hard it would be when so many cars moving on the road from morning till evening creating enormous pollution and those horn sounds in the heavy traffic. This will totally disturb the surroundings. Therefore, this could be the reason why they dislike city lifestyle.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the views about why people should not build houses at the countryside even though there is no space in the cities. My opinion is that building houses at remote areas could destroy the peacefulness of the environment. They should remain undisturbed and these are the only areas in the planet which are not highly polluted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...le think that they can build new houses out side the cities. But some of them argue that...
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Line 9, column 243, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding environment'?
Suggestion: the surrounding environment
...the area. Their intention is to protect the environment around them. Just imagine how hard it would be when...
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Line 9, column 555, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reason why they dislike city lifestyle. In conclusion, this essay discussed the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09602649007 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60450408249 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526490066225 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8857163058 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.95 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249503872039 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771796993263 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630147544269 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163633898191 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657910247572 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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