In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion?
Owing to the growing requirements to build new homes, it is thought by many people that the best place to build these houses is the countryside as there is plenty of the space available there. Others, however, opine that the protection of these areas is more important. In my opinion, homes should not be built in these areas due to the reasons which are going to be discussed in this essay.
Rural areas have an abundance of plants and trees. They release fresh oxygen into the atmosphere which helps in reducing the greenhouse gases. Because of the increased volume of these gases in the air, global warming has risen over the past few decades. It has had a profound impact on our planet such as the melting of polar ice.
As a result of the rapid increase in the sea levels, many places have become submerged. If homes are constructed in the countryside, trees will need to be cut down. Thus, global warming will further rise due to lack of oxygen and it will pose a threat to our planet earth.
It is also true that rural areas are the natural habitat of many wildlife creatures. These creatures form a critical part of the food chain. Lizards, for instance, feed on mosquitoes and insects. Construction activities lead to the / result in the extinction of many wildlife species. Similarly, if lizards become extinct, the balance of the ecological system will be disturbed and there will be a sudden increase in the number of insects and they will cause harm to crops produced by the farmers. Thus, it is critical to save these regions from these activities.
In conclusion, countryside has a crucial role as it acts as a home to flora and fauna. These places should not be used to build homes as this activity will pose a threat to the environment and human life could come to an end within a few years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, similarly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67801857585 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49157053199 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538699690402 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.270388342 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9444444444 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169994956932 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479450828468 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725071924948 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968874292962 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951746979512 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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