The housing problem has always been a concern in many places because of less supply of housing. On the one hand, people think that the development of suburbs can alleviate the housing problem. On the other hand, the environment will be damaged when developing suburbs and they are committed to preserving suburbs
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Everyone agrees on the existence of a food chain in ecology and this food chain is affected by every move of the environment. For an instance, birds build their nests on trees and eat earthworms that live in the soil. The development of suburban areas will lead to the deforestation of a large number of trees, meanwhile, the soil will be turned into concrete roads. As a result, birds will lose their habitat and foraging places, which will cause an amount of birds’ death and accelerate the extinction of some precious birds.
Besides nature being affected, humans are also affected if many trees are removed. Trees not only are oxygen generators that the leaves can absorb carbon dioxide and convert it into oxygen to purify the air. Also, they are dust filters as the wind speed decreases when the dust-laden airflow passes through the woods. As well as some trees have hairy cuticles or can secrete oil to hold dust on them. The soot and dust emitted by industrial development seriously pollute the air. If there are no trees, it will threaten human health.
In my opinion, it is understandable if there is a real shortage of housing and development land is needed, however, what the society reflects is that the population has decreased significantly, but housing is still insufficient. What the government needs is to find out why there is a shortage of housing.
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- A letter to your friend traveling overseas You are staying at their apartment and there was a storm Tell your friend about the storm Tell them what was damaged and details what repairs need to be done 10
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 314, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hey are committed to preserving suburbs . Everyone agrees on the existence of a ...
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Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...areas will lead to the deforestation of a large number of trees, meanwhile, the soil will be turn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, still, well, while, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90940766551 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66964668199 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581881533101 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9425003229 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0817033168191 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266228157856 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270849925063 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0457654148219 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115841502398 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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