Many students do not finish school. Why is this, and how can the problem be
solved?
Education is considered to be a key in the development of an individual. This essay chalks out the factors when kids drop out of schools and the ways to address this issue.
One of the many reasons why students drop out from school is lack of interest in studies. For some, studies may always be an inclination while others may find their interest in Arts, Sports or some other fields. Secondly, lack of finances from poor families make children leave their education. For example, when I was young, a friend of mine had to leave school as his father was a Farmer and they could hardly afford his academic expenses. He was made to work with his father in the fields instead.
While this may be considered a problem for some, there have been cases where leaving studies mid-way proved to be a better career option for others. For instance, it is hard to ignore the fact that people like Sachin Tendulkar, too, had an incomplete education. No one would ever question this huge cricket star about his academics because of the name he has earned. Hence, rather than forcing the children to study and get good grades, one should focus on the individual’s interest and help him or her in enhancing those skills. All these problems will create young people who do not have any skills and who will not be able to improve their lives for the family and the country.
To conclude, an incomplete education does not become a problem until and unless the student understands the pros and cons of it. In my opinion, parents should guide their kids to be a better human being irrespective of the level of education they have received. Education is compulsory but, despite this, some people do not take it
seriously. Furthermore, jobs are available even if students do not have a good education. The third reason is work pressure. Some families are poor and need their children to work in order to increase the income.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72023809524 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50495363821 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574404761905 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7625099607 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1111111111 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149888090054 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467187432616 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593819307697 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841752862674 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144660207874 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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