Nowadays several household chores and tasks are performed through machines, in comparison to past when people used to do work manually. This advancement in technology provides many benefits in contrast to drawbacks to people, who are using these devices on regular basis.
Firstly, these electronic devices are more convenient for doing housework. Devices like, washing machine, vacuum cleaner,microwave, blenders, choppers etc have made life easier for women as well as men working in domestic environment.They save time, give better results than tasks performed by hand. These machines can be used by anyone with little guidance for example, teenagers and young people who were dependant on their parents before for small household tasks can now perform in a more efficient manner. Elderly person, people with some kind of disability, can finish their work without relying on anyone. Time saved because of these machines can be utilized in other productive activities, for example, mothers can concentrate more on upbringing of their children.
On the other hand, usage of electronic devices and too much dependence can make people lazy. Performing daily routine chores by hand helps people to be fit and healthy. Another drawback of this technology is affordability, not everyone have enough money to buy these devices. It's not only purchasing of an item but amount energy and electricity required to run these is not easy on everyone's pocket. Lastly, when they are used by children without any supervision might lead to dangerous accidents, causing fatal injuries.
In the end, due to technology leap in this era people have made their lives easy by developing devices and using them efficiently, but this leisure time has made them inactive, which results in health issues. One should use this machinery in moderate manner along with tasks done manually.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , microwave
...es like, washing machine, vacuum cleaner,microwave, blenders, choppers etc have made life ...
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
... as men working in domestic environment.They save time, give better results than tas...
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Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...le, teenagers and young people who were dependant on their parents before for small house...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, well, for example, in contrast, kind of, no doubt, as well as, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35769230769 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81600192896 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638461538462 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4830396379 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124469680349 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437772625806 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344409572847 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760625514703 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225838803045 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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