Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds and providing us new avenues for accomplishing our tasks with effectiveness. Several household chores which used to be manually executed are now automated. In my opinion, I believe that this advancement has more benefits in comparison to drawbacks, and in this essay, I will support my view with examples.
Admittedly, domestic appliances have made us slaves to technology. Many people are now completely dependent on them and rarely push themselves to perform any manual homework, eventually leading them to be more lethargic at home. To illustrate , with the help of equipments such as washing machines, dish washers and vacuum cleaners people are able to complete their household tasks in no time and with not much physical involvement. If these machines were not invented, people would have been forced to execute all their tasks manually, which would help them to be healthier and fitter.
Nevertheless, despite the above disadvantage, I believe that these machines offer a plethora of advantages. These appliances have proven to be a blessing for people, specially women. Earlier women used to spend significant amount of time in household activities, leaving them with no leisure time . Furthermore, with the advent of these technological devices, they are able to spare a lot of time, which they now utilize in pursuing their career, and in taking care of their kids. For example, in a survey conducted by “Asia White Goods Association ”, it was reported that there is an increase of 42% of women returning back to work owing to the usage of these domestic appliances. Consequently, this innovation has helped to improve their living standards.
To conclude, although these appliances have made people inert at home , I believe they are now able to make use of this time in looking after their families and in seeking better opportunities in the job world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, so, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21612903226 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94946151955 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6077351513 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142674511894 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511196486063 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525252062175 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952037053536 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278305983375 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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