Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
Decades ago it was so hard to juice a fruit or cut vegetables, repairing of the damaged vehicles was almost impossible by then. now, it has become a matter of minutes by the cutting edge technological developments we can destroy gigantic building at a flick of a finger and make a delicious recipe with 100 percent perfection. machines have taken humans in a lot of ways in the modern era. Let's see how this development has affected the works which were done with hands earlier.
To begin with the advantages of machinery, these had evolved up to a maximum extent they can, every individual on earth can now control things in the home such as ac, tv, fridge and whatever they could wish for with technological machines called AI controllers. production values are taken to unbelievable levels with the use of heavy equipment among industries. With the introduction of manufacturing equipment that decreases human presence, it is possible to produce goods at enormous amounts. For instance, BMW car company has only limited employees and almost every car is produced with the perfection of robots and artificial intelligence.
On the flip side to speak about the disadvantages this kind of development has only negligible drawbacks to the amount of work they offer. Great cost for the equipment makes it unaffordable. The space this equipment require is vast which is, in turn, is exorbitant money. For example, to establish a mini-company to produce a pizza dough it requires 1500 sq ft place.
In conclusion, whatsoever the machines cost or occupy there work is admirable and will make the disadvantages overwhelmed. probably it is predicted that almost every company and industry will consider changing all productions on machine-based and develop their businesses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17993079585 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04730565687 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63321799308 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1338798101 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.928571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121375752642 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03701545699 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479779169036 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659028661525 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236699526864 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.