In the past ,people used to do daily activities on their own,as the time changed the way of living also changed,now a days we are using electronic equipments like washing machine,hand-held mixer,vacuum cleaner e.t.c. By using these we can save time and do some productive work. Every coin has two faces,there are some cons also,by utilising these home appliances alot of energy is consumed.
Firstly, let's discuss the positive traits,in this modern world women are also going to work,it is more useful for them so that they can complete the daily chores in time and leave for work. After coming from work they just switch on the machine and can spend some time with their children and other family members. Secondly,the burden will be reduced to some extent not completely. Previously we used wash our clothes there is so much of time consuming, but now the machine does 75% of the work only drying the clothes part is to be done by us. Every one can buy these products as they became affordable to everyone.
Morever, as earlier said these products consume more energy and effecting the environment and creating health problems. For small chores also they are using machines for example, dough maker, it is used to knead the dough, we can knead by ourselves by doing in this way some hand exercise will be there by this blood can circulate to every part of the body . Not only this the refrigerator releases chloro fluoro carbon gases which leads to depletion of ozone layer,which acts as a barrier between sun and earth, as sun rays contains of UV rays. If this layer is not there then the UV rays direct fall on human skin which leads to cancer and other skin diseases. However if more energy is consumed there wont be any energy and fuel for our future generations.
I conclude that, depending completely on a machine is not good, a few things we can't avoid but using them approriately makes life easier. we need to balance eco-system too.
- Many jobs in the home nowadays can be done by machines. Has it brought more advantages than disadvantages? 11
- Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines.Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages? 84
- Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... changed the way of living also changed,now a days we are using electronic equipments like...
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...ng them approriately makes life easier. we need to balance eco-system too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75294117647 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51602991144 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582352941176 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.791541713 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.428571429 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19872072821 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586508465839 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521899726155 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106775498847 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371109556445 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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