Machines are invented by humans perform any task, job quickly. Therefore, many things at home which were done by hands are now being done with machines. While it may provide people with multiple benefits, it also has some disadvantages over the traditional way of doing household chores.
Firstly, it seems obvious that humans benefited in numerous ways by using machines. Time-saving can be recognized as a major advantage. For instance, by utilizing modern electronic devices, such as vacuum cleaners, washing machines or dishwashers, people can save their time and do other things to improve daily productivity.
Secondly, machines can help humans do work in a more precise way. From small tools like screwdrivers to devices like juice mixers or grinders. Precision can mean a lot in everyday life even though most people do not notice.
However, as we know, nothing is ever completely one-sided. People nowadays have become excessively dependent on machines. Many people are using too many automatic devices that they do not know how to do small tasks without it. This also comes with health-related issues. Biologically saying, the human body is built to move and this helps to circulate blood to every part of the body. Even our nerve cells benefit from movement. Aside from this, household appliances consume a lot of energy and negatively affect the environment.
To sum up, it seems that people should be using machines to save their time but without affecting their own health and the environment too much.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...itional way of doing household chores. Firstly, it seems obvious that humans be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2024291498 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73166268401 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672064777328 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2806970248 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5882352941 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5294117647 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266393637734 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721352439072 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10862266173 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13510144602 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935540613656 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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