It is argued that many workers have health issues because of doing neither less nor no exercise during their workdays or spare time. Working extended hours is one of the main reasons for this problem and the employers should encourage their employees to do exercises.
Working more than nine to five is common everywhere in the world. Work commitments and life goals have forced people to work more than forty hours per week and they have sacrificed their sleep, leisure time, healthy eating habits, and fitness. Many working people are exhausted after long hours of shift and no time and energy to engage in fitness activities. For example, the average working per week is 50-60 hours in Sri Lanka and obesity is one of the serious health problems among many office workers.
Working people spend the most valuable time of their life at workplaces. Therefore, it is the responsibility of the employer to look after their employee's health. Employers can help their workers to maintain their fitness in many ways. Awareness is one of the important things and this means that the employer may arrange medical camps where workers would get their BMI measured, receive diet plans, and exercise plans and business owners can arrange the facilities required for doing exercises. For example, employees are granted a free sports club membership sponsored by the employer and granting a special incentive for those who have completed required hours of exercises per month.
In conclusion, many workers have failed to get enough exercises or not doing exercises because they work more and have a lesser number of hours for leisure and fitness. Employers should pay attention to this problem and required to encourage their employees to engage in fitness activities.
- In many countries today crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular Why do you think these TV shows and books are popular What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas 73
- A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time in this summer He She has asked for your advice Write a letter to your friend In your letter Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday Describe some possi 73
- Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep What problems can lack of sleep cause What can be done about lack of sleep 67
- Shopping is becoming more and more popular as a leisure activity However some people feel that this has both positive and negative effects Why is shopping so popular What effects does its increase in popularity have on individuals and on society 73
- Some people think its better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them Other people believe that it 039 s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13194444444 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46760453579 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510416666667 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3716455094 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.692307692 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394541726312 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147326013822 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718907743256 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270196006374 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365436728705 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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