Dear Tom,
I'm just writing this letter to give you some ideas for the vacation you are going to join on.
I know you're busy with office work, so I really suggest you should join this holiday because it has lots of mind-relaxing activities, games, cooking events and so on.
especially as you're doing it for the first time and because of the summer season you'll feel it more exciting.
You need to think of some possible issues like mosquito bites at nights which was the biggest problem I faced when I was there, unexpected rain and some minor injuries such as crank. so you need to be ready with necessaries in your camping kit. Insect Repellent Lotions, rainwear, medicine are some of them.
I love to join in this summer camp with you, but unfortunately, these days I'm busy with writing assignment and thesis of my degree and I need to submit them at exactly the same time where camping is going on but hopefully, both of us will be able to join with this next time as my college program ends in this year.
Keep in touch.
Mangala
- Modern technology is used in many workplaces today how do you think technology changed the ways people work Do you think there any disadvantages of relaying on technology at work 84
- Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep What problems can lack of sleep cause What can be done about lack of sleep 67
- In many countries paying for things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages 78
- Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have problems as a result Why do many working people not get enough exercise What can be done about this problem 73
- Many people work long hours leaving very little time for leisure activities Does this situation has more advantages or more disadvantages 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Tom, Im just writing this letter to give you so...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...ion you are going to join on. I know youre busy with office work, so I really sugg...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Especially
...ties, games, cooking events and so on. especially as youre doing it for the first time an...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...ooking events and so on. especially as youre doing it for the first time and because...
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Line 6, column 64, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...ng it for the first time and because of the summer season youll feel it more exciting. You nee...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...t time and because of the summer season youll feel it more exciting. You need to t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... and some minor injuries such as crank. so you need to be ready with necessaries i...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...with you, but unfortunately, these days Im busy with writing assignment and thesis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, really, so, as for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54736842105 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31241380763 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626315789474 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.0375452577 44.8134815571 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273886240714 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109065346099 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712775601753 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151974600901 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367983701023 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.