The importance of exercise and staying active has always been promoted by medical experts. In contemporary society, professionals are least bothered about engaging themselves in physical acitvities on week days or even on weekends when they have ample leisure time. As a result of this sedentary lifesyle, it is common among population to develop several health issues at an early age. This essay will discuss why people are losing interest in exercising and what can be done to address this issue.
Generally speaking, there are two main reasons why working class has suddenly adopted a sedentary and static lifestyle. While it is easy to blame technology for this, however, significant increase in stress level at work place is predominantly the reason why people are no more inclined towards any exercise or sports that involve physical exertion. In other words, after a hectic day at office, working professionals look for ways to relax their mind such as watching movies or news. For instance, a recent research carried out by Pakistan Electronic Media Authority highlighted that an average worker spends 3 4 hours daily in front of tv after office hours. Another reason why people are not exercising is due lack of parks and gyms especially in metropolitan cities.
Maintaing a good work-life balance and construction of plenty of parks and gyms by the government are both critical to promote the culture of exercise. Employers need to step in to ensure their employees are not overburdened so that the stress level can be reduced. For instance, a consultant can be hired to ensure that the work is equally distributed among the team. Futhermore, the government must review the city plan construct park and gyms in each area to ensure the inhabitats have access to these areas.
In conclusion, it is true that workers are not allocating time to exercise due to stressful work environment and lack of facilites such as play area and fitness centers. However, employers and government can play role to address these issues by creating a stress free environment at office and constructing play ground and fitness centers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...inhabitats have access to these areas. In conclusion, it is true that workers a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12034383954 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7946703173 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593123209169 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0016049025 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.133333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277362290532 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857359388708 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601976819846 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14999260691 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487756677559 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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