Many young people today spend too much time following the latest fashion trends in areas such as clothing and technology.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
With the rapid-paced technological world, many young individuals spend a lot of time following the latest fashion trends, especially in clothing and technology. I strongly agree with this statement for two key reasons.
The first reason why younger ones like to follow newest clothing or technology trends is a sense of satisfaction. Since some people have a habit of moving forward with the world, they believe in purchasing latest clothes or technological gadgets such as smartphones and laptops. As a result, having been surrounded by updated technological devices and latest brands clothes makes them more satisfied. Moreover, they also do that as they are praised and admired by societies due to the possession of the trendy materials.
The second and the most obvious reason why youngsters follow the market trends is that an increase in their attraction towards the brand new products. Due to the fact that nowadays marketing companies advertise their products through the famous celebrities, young people are more attracted, and hence, they follow the latest fashion trends and spend more and more time on this. As an example, many clothing brands promote their contemporary fashioned clothes with famous film-stars wearing such clothes, which appeals almost all their fans and worshipers, and therefore, they spend their most of the time in the selection of their suitable clothes.
In short, having been satisfied and been attracted to new brands are the reasons why young people spend too much time in following the updated trends. I, therefore, believe that young generation prefer spending time following up to date fashion whether in clothing or technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'follow the newest'.
Suggestion: follow the newest
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'purchasing the latest'.
Suggestion: purchasing the latest
...forward with the world, they believe in purchasing latest clothes or technological gadgets such a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ied. Moreover, they also do that as they are praised and admired by societies due...
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Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...es advertise their products through the famous celebrities, young people are more attracted, and h...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...othing brands promote their contemporary fashioned clothes with famous film-stars...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, moreover, second, so, therefore, in short, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36742424242 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75628247645 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7281787904 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.818181818 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358199019632 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135992200881 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774025983278 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22596794986 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375017989848 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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