The mark of a successful person is to be wealthy and have a successful career.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, there is an argument in place with the success of a person’s life is depending on their wealth and occupation. I strongly believe that these criteria does not have a substantial impact on a person’s life. This essay will discuss the issues using the examples to support my arguments and demonstrate points.
For example, a lawyer who wins all his cases may be achieving a tremendous progress in his job at the same time he might not be happy as he is supporting the guilty people. A person in the society feels happy when he is supported by his family and friends. When a person climbs a mountain may not get monetary benefit but he might be happy for achieving the desired target.
Hence, the money and positions would not have provided happiness. On the other hand, a teacher who is teaching the students may happier than those who lead a top position in the Company. In fact the people believe that the profession and wealth is a measure of the status of a person. These are substantiated criteria for success of a persons life.
Apart from this, success of a person’s life is depending on his character and the society which he belongs to. I strongly believe that the prosperity of a person is not his career or financial condition. Wealth cannot provide a person mental happiness, the world’s richest person may not be the happiest person in the world. Apart from this, a person can achieve astronomical improvement in his occupation by his educational qualification but he cannot succeed until he is a brilliant human being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ith the success of a person's life is depending on their wealth and occupation. I stron...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'tremendous progress'.
Suggestion: tremendous progress
...who wins all his cases may be achieving a tremendous progress in his job at the same time he might no...
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Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...substantiated criteria for success of a persons life. Apart from this, success of a ...
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Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...m this, success of a person's life is depending on his character and the society which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, apart from, for example, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83643122677 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86910346179 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53531598513 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5988891564 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9285714286 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141369921306 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577206512031 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375124030915 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877084764757 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163262479834 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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