Modern communications mean that it is no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
With the rapid growth in technology, communication has taken many new forms, even a person staying continents away could be contacted in no matter of time. So of the new communication means include email, social sites, cellular mobiles, fax machines. However, in my opinion letter do hold a special place and are not something, which can become obsolete.
The newer age technology communication has definitely changed our life style to a great extent. The change being more towards doing good, with descend of cellular mobiles, it has become easier and convenient, to be in touch with the loved ones. Although people stay in different countries or even continents, for that matter, they can talk to each other at a much reasonable price. In earlier days, if any important message had to be sent across to a far away place, it used to take days or months together. In which case most of the time the matter of urgency is lost.
The advent of social networking has taken communications to a next level. We can make friends across the borders. This brought the world together in many ways. Be it a technology, a political, or a social happening, it is quickly conveyed to the whole world with a single click. The fund raising for the devastated state, kerala, due to recent floods is a very good example. Modern communication has been playing a key role in globalization.
However, there is always another side to a coin. This exceeding intense lightning fast connectivity have also spread like a wild fire, with no control. The recent mob lynching that have been taking place in the country, over a fake news about child kidnappers is one such an example. Even, many a times, social agitations had taken place leading to the loss of public property. It brings people quickly together for a good cause.
Letters in the other hand are very efficient means of communications at the same time can be well controlled. They still hold a very high position in the society. Letters are the most sought out means for any official communications. In our Indian government, any of the communication, which is of high importance, is made in letterform. Even when it comes down to personal things, letter effectively convey the message. In this busy life, if someone puts down a pen on a paper and writes to a person, it shows how important or special the other person is, to him. Any special feelings when conveyed in the form of a letter, remain for long in one’s memory and are treasured. I would prefer writing a letter to my husband to convey a special message or to sort out any misunderstandings, though we live under the same roof. To sum it up, letter can never be replaced and have their own importance.
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- You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation. 78
- Complaint Letter on Accommodation 11
- Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. 78
- Modern communications mean that it is no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 84
- Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'fake news'.
Suggestion: fake news
... been taking place in the country, over a fake news about child kidnappers is one such an e...
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Line 7, column 296, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...pers is one such an example. Even, many a times, social agitations had taken place lead...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, well, in my opinion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2247.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 471.0 315.596192385 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77070063694 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8036573754 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549893842887 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7981704613 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.25 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8214285714 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13508501664 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326249785176 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369346455078 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776782640052 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248136427144 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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