You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation.
Dear Mr. Walter,
My name is Spoorthi and I am taking a 10-week fast track course on automotive engineering in your esteemed university. My company is bearing the expenses to pay for my tuition and accommodation fee. It is expected of me that I make the best use of this course to be able to apply the same at work.
I am staying in Whitehall hostel near to the campus. When I organized my accommodation, I was told that I would be given a single-occupancy room. However, the room that is provided to me is shared by two other mates. Moreover, they seem to be here for summer course on music and hence keep playing the instruments at high volume.
Despite requesting multiple times to lower the volume, I have not seen any major difference. I am unable to focus on my course study and would like to move to a different hostel where more mature students stay and would like to have a single-occupancy. Request you to address my concern promptly. Failing which, I will be left with no alternative, but to shift to a hotel room and take back the amount paid towards the accommodation for coming months.
I will be waiting to hear from you.
Yours sincerely,
Spoorthi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5971563981 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88544257367 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635071090047 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0450589517 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6153846154 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175168762778 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053126484914 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276360839788 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921428245478 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02881957342 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.