Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Ravi,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter in response to your complaint letter sent to me yesterday about the noise from my flat. I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience caused to you. I would like to explain myself.
We are planning to celebrate our forthcoming wedding anniversary so I had hired a firm to renovate our house. Since, the time is incredibly less they had to bring heavy machinery, which would help them finish the work much faster. This is the reason you might have heard abnormal noise levels.
I was unaware that the sound would reach your house. Therefore, I have instructed the personnel to tone down the noise level because of which your apartment should already be relatively silent. I hope this measure would appease you. By the way, the work will complete by tomorrow. I would request you to come home tomorrow evening so that I can take you around to show the revamped flat.
Yours sincerely,
Spoorthi
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| 2018-09-06 | Ravi Gajula | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ze for the inconvenience caused to you. I would like to explain myself and humbly...
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Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... work much faster, this is why you have been hearing lots of noise. To be honest, I was u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7610619469 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51788185411 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628318584071 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.75 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.25 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.125 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248337665943 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840034512328 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702924774165 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109098911481 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720796848753 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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