Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat

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Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat

Dear Ravi,

Greetings!!

Hope you are doing great. I am writing this letter in response to your complaint letter sent to me yesterday about the noise from my flat. I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience caused to you and request for apology. I would like to explain myself on the actual cause.

This is mainly because of our upcoming wedding anniversary preparations, we had decided to hire a firm to renovate our house in the available short period of time. Hence, they had to bring heavy machinery to complete the assigned work. I was unaware of the fact that the sound would reach your house and create the disturbances around the area. I have already informed the personal to close all the windows with which the level of noise will lessen automatically.

I hope this measure would appease you. By the way, the work would be completed tomorrow. Please get back to us in personal if you hear any further noise from our flat.

Once again, I am extremely sorry for any annoyance caused by my action. I hope you would accept my apology. Thanks for your patience on this matter. Please come by tomorrow evening so that I take you around my freshly revamped flat.

Yours sincerely,
Spoorthi

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... caused to you and request for apology. I would like to explain myself on the act...
^
Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...novate our house in the available short period of time. Hence, they had to bring heavy machine...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... of noise will lessen automatically. I hope this measure would appease you. By...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, by the way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80861244019 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54637174539 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626794258373 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7643655578 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8125 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0625 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5625 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260650701974 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761529927766 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688471371651 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143828246991 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037303443105 0.0580467560999 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.73 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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