You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear, James
Good morning
I hope you are doing good. I recently got your email regarding the complain of noise from my apartment and i am really sorry for the inconvenience you have last night.
with regards to the noise- my sister had just passed the toughest exam of nursing- NCLEX and noise was created by the surprise party we gave to her. As you know, how importan are family member in our lives and my sister is very closed with me who always stay with me even she is 25 years old. I were so happy in her progess that, i invite all her friends and family to celebtrate her party.
We closed all the door and windows thinking that sound will not distrub other resident in the apartment. unfortunetly, i got the c0mpalint email and i am really sorry that you had to suffer from our noise. Also, i want to make sure that, further i will be carefull while doing such parties and nobody will suffer from any noise latenight.
Again, extremely sorry for this time.
Thank you
Regards,
Asmita acharya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
Dear, James Good morning I hope you are doing good. I recently got...
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Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...d morning I hope you are doing good. I recently got your email regarding the c...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: APARTMENT-FLAT[1]
Message: This word is common for American English. Did you mean 'flat'?
Suggestion: flat
...regarding the complain of noise from my apartment and i am really sorry for the inconveni...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: i is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...complain of noise from my apartment and i am really sorry for the inconvenience y...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...e inconvenience you have last night. with regards to the noise- my sister had jus...
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Line 7, column 294, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... stay with me even she is 25 years old. I were so happy in her progess that, i in...
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Line 7, column 296, Rule ID: PERS_PRONOUN_AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am' or 'ate'?
Suggestion: am; ate
...tay with me even she is 25 years old. I were so happy in her progess that, i invite ...
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Line 7, column 331, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: i is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...d. I were so happy in her progess that, i invite all her friends and family to ce...
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Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: APARTMENT-FLAT[1]
Message: This word is common for American English. Did you mean 'flat'?
Suggestion: flat
... will not distrub other resident in the apartment. unfortunetly, i got the c0mpalint emai...
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Line 9, column 106, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unfortunetly
...istrub other resident in the apartment. unfortunetly, i got the c0mpalint email and i am rea...
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Line 9, column 120, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: i is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...esident in the apartment. unfortunetly, i got the c0mpalint email and i am really...
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Line 9, column 150, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: i is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...rtunetly, i got the c0mpalint email and i am really sorry that you had to suffer ...
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Line 9, column 213, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: i is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...you had to suffer from our noise. Also, i want to make sure that, further i will ...
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Line 9, column 247, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: i is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...Also, i want to make sure that, further i will be carefull while doing such parti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, really, regarding, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58152173913 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24386766717 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646739130435 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4228895553 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161485748598 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619895738002 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697699690922 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106723212088 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902609230415 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.