The chart bellow shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008

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The chart bellow shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

The bar chart illustrates the portion of men, women and children consuming five amounts of fruits and vegetables on daily basis in the UK, throughout the 8 years starting from 2001.

Overall, it can be seen that, women consumed highest portion of fruits and vegetables, while children ate the lowest percentage. Furthermore, the bar chart shows the increasing trend on consuming fruits and vegetables in the UK.

To begin with, in 2001, women ate more than 20% of fruits and vegetables, which is more than nearly 10% and 5% pf children and men respectively. This figure rose steadily and reached its peak in 2006, with almost 35%, just before declining to nearly 30% in 2008.

In term of men and children, the percentage of 2001 remain constant for next two years with about 17% and 7% respectively. After that, with gradual increment, the portion of men experienced its highest point in 2006 and 2007 by 28% and dropped slightly by approximately 3% in 2008. A similar pattern can be seen for the children as well. They reached at the peak in 2007 with about 25% and decreased mildly by approximately 2% in 2008

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'consumed the highest'.
Suggestion: consumed the highest
... Overall, it can be seen that, women consumed highest portion of fruits and vegetables, while...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, well, while, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81865284974 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7072724793 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580310880829 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9850056065 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242524721011 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100269920961 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907591046999 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164638011909 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877987530462 0.0819641961636 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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