You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,
• say what the problem is
• describe the accommodation you thought you were getting
• ask the provider to solve the problem
Dear Sir,
My name is Tina, I am studying a short course at York University, Canada. I am coming from India to study this course for my higher education. I am writing this letter to inform that the accommodation you have provided is noisy, next to my room there is a gym for men and it is working 24 hours a day. They play music or songs all-time in high volume which is effecting my studies. I already have a complaint about this issue to the security of locality, but nothing has changed.
I never thought that this issue will come on my way and impacts my education severely. Before coming here, I assured that this accommodation is not a hostel, but a private place to live, thus it will be noise-free and clean all the time. Unfortunately, this is not the truth and I already have tried my best to stop this problem.
Therefore, I would request you to please take some steps immediately against the gym club or change my residence to somewhere countryside. I need to finish this problem as soon as possible to continue my studies smoothly.
I hope you will understand my problem and take some productive actions.
Yours sincerely,
Vishal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, My name is Tina, I am studying a short c...
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Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...productive actions. Yours sincerely, Vishal
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Line 11, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e actions. Yours sincerely, Vishal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6213592233 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70147266632 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621359223301 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1313191321 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128934283044 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548093755391 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441377812255 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074148746726 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327095385974 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.