Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
technology is changing hand-written papers to digital ones. According to some, writing letters in modern communications is not needed anymore. In my opinion, mailing technology benefits both environment and receivers and readers in different ways in comparison with old real paper version.
The first reason that it is no more appeals for writing letters is that obviously the virtual letters do not need papers which are made from trees. For example. many trees are fallen just to be used for a death announcement letter which will be thrown away after reading .
Secondly, another good reason of unnecessary paper letters is that the mail transportation system is quite slow. many letters have been received by delay, besides that some of them have been lost forever. Fortunately transporting digital mails are less than a minute and it also can be included attachments like pictures, songs whether videos.
Finally, it is also undeniable sometimes hand writers write awfully and unreadable, therefore the reader might be confuse of the concept of the letter. In other word, it may cause a wrong decision which play with a person’s life. For example, an execution command which is written unreadable. digital letters in comparison with hand-written papers are more structured with borders and unique fonts.
In conclusion, some believe writing letters are needless in modern societies, and I am totally agree that eliminating hand-written letters as a step to modern communication benefits both environment and personal .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48535564854 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92868467385 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63179916318 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9187769426 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.846153846 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109054317188 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039399466076 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488592056055 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684494262599 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042522520891 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.