Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
With the advent of technological devices in the modern era, there has been a steep decline in the demand for primitive ways of exchanging messages. The modern communication system has eradicated the requirement to write letters. And, I firmly concur that the new era of communication is replacing the old ones.
Communications have become more convenient because of technological advancements. People can now share the messages within minutes which earlier took days to reach the concerned person. For instance, earlier the fastest mode of communication used to be telegrams that took nearly 2-3 days which, after the invention of telephones reduced to 1 minute.
Moreover, with the invention of video calls, the emotional touch of the letters has also withered over a period of time. Nowadays, a person can meet another person virtually through video calls conversations, and exchanging information which was lacking in the older ways of communication. According to the BBC survey, 79% of the world's population believes in using the video call virtual feature where they feel more connected with their loved ones rather than writing and exchanging letters. Additionally, with the rapid development of technology, elderly people can communicate effortlessly. All you need is to speak and the smart device will automatically translate it into notes which can be shared with the relevant person.
In conclusion, the current era of telecommunications has pushed letters writing to the brink which would sooner or later become extinct. Some reasons being convenenience, addition of emotional touch with video calls, and the east of modern communication system would be the result of such effect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...of the letters has also withered over a period of time. Nowadays, a person can meet another pe...
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Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...According to the BBC survey, 79% of the worlds population believes in using the video ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45075757576 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11960967617 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609848484848 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3413805078 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.692307692 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154090302357 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597165404664 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04039518025 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967002145656 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377508975218 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.