With the advent of technology, the distance between countries and people have minimized to a great extent. Communicating with your loved ones abroad has been swift and instant in today's world. But, due to this easy access of information across different cultures there is a dilution in the originality of a regions tradition. This essay agrees with the statement and would like to share some insight on the topic.
On one hand, the introduction of internet has connected people across the world through emails, social media, video calling, which all seemed to be impossible in the distant past. This has brought people closer and instant exchange of information is possible with the click of a button. For example, if I want to cancel an appointment at the last minute I can just text the person and reschedule it immediately. With the help of one email a meeting can be fixed with a group of people in a company within seconds. The benefits of technological advancements have enhanced every sphere of life.
On the other hand, the same technology has broken all the cultural barriers by educating one language to people of different cultures and adoption of those traditions has led to unsuccessful life for many. What is accepted in one culture may have a negative effect on the other culture. To exemplify, due to the westernization of Indian culture the essence of the values and traditions is lost, people try to emulate the west and have had serious consequences at home. The disadvantage of the internet is that it is destroying the age old history and the way of life in many areas of the world.
In conclusion, technological breakthroughs have made life much simpler and accessible with the help of internet and transportation however, it has marred the rich culture, traditions and values of many countries and has brought a single culture across the globe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 308, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'regions'' or 'region's'?
Suggestion: regions'; region's
...e is a dilution in the originality of a regions tradition. This essay agrees with the s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94620253165 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88160845378 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534810126582 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8598937508 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.642857143 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136881663554 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491343428165 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286603439395 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794357517212 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373543752024 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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