modern technology is changing our world .This has advantages such as bringing people together through communication. it also has disadvantages such as destroying differences between cultures. To what extent agree or disagree
With the advent of newer technologies in the field of communication, people could come under one umbrella. It is adversely affected to some of the communities by mixing up of different cultures to form a new one. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the above mentioned statement.
on one hand, it became much easier and convenient for the people to gather with a common vision on a particular subject or a specific idea, because of the newer inventions , which made conveying of a message much easier.For instance, in a protest which was organised against the current government of Egypt in 2014, nearly 40,000 people participated merely with a three days of advertisements through the social medias. Hence this newer explorations became inevitable and pivotal on the other in the human's life.
on the other hand, the newer advancements in this are became a ground and helped to expand the globalization, which gradually helped other cultures to intrude into the indigenous communities. in other words, it mixed the cultures with one another to form a new one. For example most of the Indian Metropolitan cities are following western traditions, mainly in the field of fashion and in their dietary, as the western companies took the Upper Hand in these in the Cities.
in conclusion, though it is inevitable that a minor drawback to happen with any new inventions, but the advancement particularly in the field of communication made humans to travel a long distance.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08196721311 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00808296074 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565573770492 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.313289232 49.4020404114 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.777777778 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2222222222 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0619610686076 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283793804242 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280252805763 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0380135830447 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355831180403 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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