With the advent of technology, the distance between countries and people have minimized to a great extent. Communicating with your loved ones abroad has been swift and instant in today's world. But, due to this easy access to information across different cultures, there is a dilution in the originality of a region's tradition. This essay agrees with the statement and would like to share some insight on the topic.
On one hand, the introduction of the internet has connected people across the world through emails, social media, video calling, which all seemed to be impossible in the distant past. This has brought people closer and instant exchange of information is possible with the click of a button. For example, if I want to cancel an appointment at the last minute I can just text the person and reschedule it immediately. With the help of one email, a meeting can be fixed with a group of people in a company within seconds. The benefits of technological advancements have enhanced every sphere of life.
On the other hand, the same technology has broken all the cultural barriers by educating one language to people of different cultures and the adoption of those traditions has led to unsuccessful life for many. Traditions that are accepted in one culture may not be acceptable to the other culture. To exemplify, due to the westernization of Indian culture the essence of the values and traditions is lost, people try to emulate the west and have had serious consequences at home. The disadvantage of the internet is that it is destroying the age-old history and the way of life in many areas of the world.
In conclusion, technological breakthroughs have made life much simpler and accessible with the help of the internet and transportation, however, it has marred the rich culture, traditions, and values of many countries and has brought a single culture across the globe.
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- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate school. Others, however, believe that girls and boys benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate school. Others, however, believe that girls and boys benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'regions'' or 'region's'?
Suggestion: regions'; region's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98113207547 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91533687836 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534591194969 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.063266038 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.142857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139206634601 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490949835474 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330065599629 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801863164203 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422133073628 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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