In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals as food or other products, such as medicines and clothing. Do you agree or disagree?
Recently, there are a huge number of products derived from animals as clothes and food can be replaced by other alternative sources. Personally, whilst I agree with aforementioned statement, I still reckon that animals play a critical role in medical field.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that using animals in fashion and food industry that puts them suffer from physical pain is comparatively inhumane. To begin with, animals have been the major source for manufacturing procedures of numerous types of outfit for top classes. Some people argue that dressing up clothes and wearing jewelries making from rare animals’ skin could reaffirm their social status in terms of financial background and the quantity of illegal poachers have emerged significantly which can put a threat to animal species. Nevertheless, thanks to the advancement in various aspects, other available materials can be in lieu of their skin. Additionally, the role of animal in food industry can experience a downward trend on account of new tendency of vegetarism. As a matter of fact, several vegetarians select this kind of diet for both moral and health reasons. To be more specific, residents are enthusiastically encouraged to eat a balanced diet with fruits and vegetables with a view to avoid some diseases related to cardiovascular from animals’ fat.
On the other hand, I 'm inclined to believe that it is essential to use animals for testing medicines intended for human use. In the first place, gaining a profound understanding of inner workings of human body, especially complex organs like brain and heart, is currently impossible and some kinds of animals show the biological similarity, which can make a huge contribution to man kind. In details, some animals like chimpanzees and monkeys ,are our closet cousins, are used to test advanced treatment for drugs. To cite an example, during the expansion of Covid-19 pandemic, many experimental medicine have been tested in animals in order to check for the effectiveness and counterproductive of drugs before being used widely. Furthermore, although the number of volunteers for this type of medical experiments has increased considerably, it is unavoidable case of suffering some fatal risk of drugs. Hence, human beings still is reliant on animal experiments.
To summarize, although people may limit our dependence on animals to some extent, animals are still regarded as an irreplaceable part of particular side.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ome animals like chimpanzees and monkeys ,are our closet cousins, are used to test...
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Line 3, column 578, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun medicine seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much experimental medicine', 'a good deal of experimental medicine'.
Suggestion: much experimental medicine; a good deal of experimental medicine
...ing the expansion of Covid-19 pandemic, many experimental medicine have been tested in animals in order to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, thus, kind of, as a matter of fact, to begin with, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2075.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30690537084 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07448794255 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601023017903 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6977052938 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.6875 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4375 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180136652488 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646838751722 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513409382486 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118321464447 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444066352346 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.