The money spent by governments on space programmes would be better spent on
vital public services such as schools and hospitals.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
From past few decades, space programs are the biggest achievements of many nations. Government spends enormous amount of money for the space research projects every year. It is commonly argued by many that such spending should be spent for better public services such as education and health care. I completely disagree with them because I believe government spent the capital of country appropriately in each sector.
The space studies are very critical and significant, thus require a substantial share of fund. Moreover, the space scientist put their lives on risk when going for such projects. they deserve a great support by the government whether it is money wise or safety wise. For example, we could not forget the contribution of many astronauts, who sacrificed their lives in some accident or mishap that occurred during research.
There are incredible discoveries that man has made due to space projects such as, size and structure of various planets, possibility of life on moon, to mention a few. It could not have been plausible, if there were not enough fund by government. spending the money on space programs is equally important than spending on other public services because, a less count of school or hospital would not be as terrible as lack of knowledge about our universe.
In conclusion, I believe that government spent the capital of its nation wisely in each section. I disagree with those who believe space projects fund could be better used for other services because space projects are equally important than any other service. Space researches are conducted by extra ordinary genius people and they deserve financial support by governments to make their country proud.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Spending
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1884057971 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66499238555 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7314142393 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.285714286 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264510180059 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846483763422 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658231505467 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163635941979 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691029200366 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.