The world of these days is the world of fashion and glamour. People tend to be fashionable and look attractive with the help of new and branded fashionable clothes .In other words, this trend is developing the sense of competition among peoples for clothing .Such type of sense of competition is not good for positive development of a society and nation because it leaves a negative remark on community.
firstly, everyone wants to look modern with the help of fashionable clothes but problem is that all people can not afford money to buy new branded cloths because price of such branded cloths is very expensive .similarly , it create a big differences between high class , middle class and low class people. For an instance , one of my friend named astha always wear branded cloths in even small casual meetings to show her new cloths because she belongs from so called high class family.
Secondly ,the wish for being modern n fashionable in people is pampering some social evils like robbery, acid attacks on beautiful women and kidnapping .Moreover when a person wears fashionable and latest trending cloths on public obviously it catches a concern and attention and such type of effect is not always positive . Some evil minded person makes a negative perception of a person . For an example,some years ago there was a common friend of mine named Aditi who mostly used to wear fashionable cloths and one boy used to love her but she denied his love later on, she became a victim of acid attack and died during treatment.
ultimately, the people who wear new designed cloths are evaluated in a negative sense specially by old age people.They think that such type of dressing sense leaves negative remark on young generations .some old view people judge the character of smart n fashionable persons badly .Consider a example, few days ago i went to my relatives house . Uncle stared at me with big eyes at first but i ignored , after one day my aunt said that i would not have worn such type of cloths infront of uncle
To sum up ,we should wear fashionable cloths according to place and situation because we can be misjudged . In addition fashionable cloths can hamper the life of some people in few social crime cases so we should be aware about that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, in addition, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78205128205 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55421381879 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548717948718 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.308119345 49.4020404114 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 186.5 106.682146367 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 20.7667163134 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193019027771 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834942817306 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595608170051 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118792948133 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603535726362 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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