Our global diaspora is broadly segregated into two halves oriental and occidental. There are bound to be difference on social, economical and cultural front as well. Therefore the issue of reading, writing, math and adding computer as a fourth skill is of no exception and has it own advantages and disadvantages. This essay is going to support the addition of computer skill and discuss the advantages and disadvantages and come to a conclusion.
Ever since the advancement of technology, computer has immerse tremendously in helping humans in daily task. This include in sending emailing, reading news, managing of personal bank account from home and mobile phones and in training staff in company. Another, pivotal aspect of my argument is that humans cannot cope without the use of computers and many schools are introducing student to the use of different apps in other to get their assessment done from home. This in turn to help them student better prepared for the future that is now computer oriented.
However, many people believe that computer introduction in school will distract student from studying and they will be more focus on games, movies and using it to plays with friends. How can student cope, with what computers has to offer if they don't know how to operate them? Can student be able to conduct research if they can't operate computers? This are questions everyone needs to consider.
To conclude, although computer is highly beneficial but we should be prudent to strike a balance, logical and rational outcomes towards the optimal and fruitful utilization of resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: Did you mean 'owns'?
Suggestion: owns
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Suggestion: immersed
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13409961686 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73070163226 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63601532567 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4237948257 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22006277908 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727007627177 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516368072045 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122336768988 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04590593023 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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