When it comes to the minimum driving age of children, different people hold different views. Some argue that children could drive at 18 while I personally believe that people should not drive until 25.
Admittedly, asking children to drive at 18 is reasonable in certain aspects. Initially, young adults who are above 18 year old are mentally mature enough to handle emergencies. To illustrate, most countries have concluded through several scientific studies that juveniles can learn driving and overcome their road fear at early age like 18. Moreover, 18 year old is the age at which youngsters start to engage in certain personal affairs. During this mature age they start going to college and need to have enough facilities like own transport to live an independent life.
However ,25 years old men’s brains are more fully developed. As a result, they would be calmer when encountering the emergent situations. Moreover, as a mature adult, there are less possibility for them to drag racing, due to the fact that they are accustomed to a relatively low speed. On the contrary, most youngsters get driven/compelled by passion to ride at high speed and thus lead to serious road accidents. For instance, in a country like India where roads are so shabby and easy to cause vehicle collision, speeding is a common factor for serious fatalities.
In conclusion, I do believe the aforementioned points that governments should not continue to issue driving license at age of 18 because 25 year old it is the perfect age to learn driving. However, their intention to drive furiously could be controlled by enforcing strict traffic laws and legislation in place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
...ntific studies that juveniles can learn driving and overcome their road fear at early a...
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Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to live an independent life. However ,25 years old men's brains are more ...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
...year old it is the perfect age to learn driving. However, their intention to drive furi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10948905109 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84198558983 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624087591241 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0667002923 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35134877678 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114430230801 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861635816034 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209619294496 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823959531865 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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