Environment related problems are inceasing day by day in every country because ignorance of the government. However these days people become so selfish.So they do not care about the mother nature . Personally i agree to some extent with this statement . I will illuminate my notions in next paragraphs.
To begin with , There are a multifarious reasons behind it why most of people neglegence the issues of environment . First of all , Global warming is the biggest issue of the world . Because nowadays every nation are facing the global warming threat . It is caused by increased concentrations of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere, mainly from human activities such as burning fossil fuels, deforestation and farming.For example, According to the survey of combridge university of london , In 2019 Delhi was the most polluted city in world because of massive traffic jams in Delhi.Hence, these vehicle emmit harmful gases in the atmosphere , which incease the greenhouse effect in the atmosphere.
Furthermore, Another reason is that the massive use of plastic products. which is very dangerous for our earth.Individuals are using plastic bottels, bags and so on. Howevever, they use it and throw it instead of recyling it.Since, thesedays it become a major issue worldwide.Due to this , the quality of soil has become fargile , Whereas it also effect on the farming as well. For instance, In the year of 2018 , Himachal pardesh Goveronment implemented law against the massive use of plastic . They attracted their society to use paper bag Therefore Authority also aware their people about the plastic demerits . Moreover , its a management duties to restrict this type of thing in the environment.they should also aware the people . Like , develop a NGO's as well as organize a event's to cover this chapter. It is agonizing that we are living on earth but we do not care about it.
To sum up , In my prospective , environment plays a vital role in every person's life. we should understand our responsibilities to invent a clean nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23312883436 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09286907408 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604294478528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.6204279324 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7777777778 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209083850713 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061203977317 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820551313076 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104731047625 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785003320878 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.