Most people prefer shopping in supermarkets nowadays. How does this affect the local shops? What are the positive and negative impacts of this development?
Shopping is generally thought of in terms of fulfilling needs. With the increasing facility of hypermarkets and shopping malls, the way people shop has changed over the years. However, it is not deniable that such infrastructural development affects the growth of local businesses. I believe that this development has more positives than negatives.
To begin with, there are various reasons to choose supermarkets over local shops. Firstly, malls provide a variety of products, so that buyers can get a number of options to choose from. To exemplify, products of different brands are sold here, from the national and international markets. Moreover, they do not only sell limited items but a range of products starting from essential goods to electronic items, which avail people to purchase items under one roof. In addition to this, products are merchandised in such a way that buyers can comfortably find the products they need easily.
Secondly, apart from these facilities they also render several entertainment options to make the shopping experience wonderful. This includes game arenas, movie theatres, and so on, due to which shoppers often spend more time over there. Finally, considering that often buyers feel hungry after shopping, this need is also being fulfilled in one place, because of the arrangement of an in-built food court selling all types of food.
On the other hand, all the said amenities are not possible to be provided by the small local shops because of the lack of space and due to limited investment. However, these shops are mostly popular only amongst the fewer people who live nearby. Because of the less market penetration they end up closing their shops or earn less profit.
To conclude, these factors have a positive impact on people’s lives and the economy. Hence, this phenomenon of shopping in supermarkets has more advantages than purchasing from local businesses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... than purchasing from local businesses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27687296417 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75412511482 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609120521173 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7408597424 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2941176471 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292115953259 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908474371822 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642280460562 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178837559941 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994943728443 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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