Everyone has nostalgic memories of childhood days and would like to return to them if given a chance. There are numerous mature person who believe that early age of life in school or at home are the golden period of everybody life. I fully agree with the above notion and give plethora of reasons in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, the key reason for this thinking is freedom from responsibilities and the only person a child is responsible for himself/herself. Life is therefore less complicated and goes on slower pace. For instance, when I was studied in school, I had only accountable for my studies and I had nothing to do with hassle and menace created in family or society. Moreover, people tend to treat kids with love and affections and believe they are innocent as well as contain pure soul. In addition to this, there are lots of playing which is also a fun part of growing up.
Ostensibly, multitude believe that childhood is a stress free life and even they had lot of maiden experienced and plenty of petulance behaviours. A child must go through a period of learning basic life skills such as etiquettes and appropriate languages which ultimately create their holistic development for long life. For example, small kids don't care about any political issues, instead of it, they thinking limited to daily routine like playing or studying time. Furthermore, in young age we met various person of our age and some of which becomes our best friend for whole life and converted into momentous time.
Hammering the final nail, I would reiterate that childhood is much better than adulthood because at this tender age, there is no responsibility and stress and we mostly met some precious person which later on remains in our life as best friends. So, this is the preliminary reason for appreciate this age as nearest in life.
- Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your own opinion 82
- Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed What are the reasons for doing this Is this a positive or negative development 53
- Nowadays people use different machines and devices to do housework. Do you see it continuing as a trend? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? 84
- Most people say that childhood and school years are the best years in their lives. Why do you think people say that? Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion. 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85804416404 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70689666483 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596214511041 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.615574229 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0766181895444 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255661195809 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0192975403376 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0481670802651 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114578315801 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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