In multicultural societies, people of different cultural backgrounds live and work together.
Do you think the advantages of multicultural societies outweigh the disadvantages?
Due to the effects of globalisation people have started to immigrate more often. It has been ruining national homogenic in all countries and brings new challenges for governments and people on the whole.
On the one hand proof of multiethnicity that they complement each other bringing their national diversity to the country. If you live in a multinational country, you learn to be more tolerant to other cultures. It leads to building more open-mind societies which are based on respect and preserving different identities. In other words it gives a possibility to create a safe place for living for many people where they can develop their own talents.
But on the other hand sometimes people can not assimilate in multicultural societies. There are many reasons for it. For example, if people do not know the local language, it is more difficult for them to become a part of the community and expand their view about the world. It might give rise to prejudice because we treat everything unknown with care and and splits the society according to language. And we took only language, but there are many attributes like nations, religion and colour of skin. All those feature could be a reason for discrimination against and separation. As we know from history, splitting countries have higher levels of interior aggression and weaker in comparing with united countries.
In conclusion, I want to say that I am in two minds because it is a challenge for multicultural society to find a way where more advantages than disadvantages and which way will be chosen depends on them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in other words, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97735849057 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90949024736 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5900549252 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2142857143 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168250229235 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519808486423 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051006448186 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997487732352 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038787451101 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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