Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. some people think that music brings only benefits to the individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, playing musical instrument has taken a crucial part for social life. Every society and culture in the world assumes that music has brought beneficial effects to personal and community activities, while the other groups think that tone has triggered harmful effects into both. This essay will elaborate both views and give my favour to this as well as put forward some relevant reasons.
On the one hand, a group of people support that music activity has positive ways to attract people's life. First and foremost, music might be able to release stress level for employees who work under pressure, many project assignments should be done, meet deadline and so forth. Giving several minutes to take a break and hearing the music would be a practical solution to calm down the mindedness from work. Thus, large number of big industries in Jakarta could be taken as an instance that implementing an instrumental tone in every staff's room could cut their boring. Second and even more importantly though that music could allow energy within to rise a creative ideas and thoughts, as a result, a few companies in the world have applied this condition.
On the other hand, the opponents is also believed that playing music has negative ways on social activities. Firstly, type of music could break personal's focus or concentration on things while they are doing, this means that some people do not like to hear the music due to the fact that could decrease their work's focus. Secondly, hearing music regularly with earphones could suffer people from hearing problem.
By way of conclusion, music gave more positive impact into social life both personal or community, therefore I strongly recommend that everyone who want explore the music when they are certain ways based on location and time.
Nowadays, playing musical instrument has taken a crucial part for social life. Every society and culture in the world assumes that music has brought beneficial effects to personal and community activities, while the other groups think that tone has triggered harmful effects into both. This essay will elaborate both views and give my favour to this as well as put forward some relevant reasons.
On the one hand, a group of people support that music activity has positive ways to attract people's life. First and foremost, music might be able to release stress level for employees who work under pressure, many project assignments should be done, meet deadline and so forth. Giving several minutes to take a break and hearing the music would be a practical solution to calm down the mindedness from work. Thus, large number of big industries in Jakarta could be taken as an instance that implementing an instrumental tone in every staff's room could cut their boring. Second and even more importantly though that music could allow energy within to rise a creative ideas and thoughts, as a result, a few companies in the world have applied this condition.
On the other hand, the opponents is also believed that playing music has negative ways on social activities. Firstly, type of music could break personal's focus or concentration on things while they are doing, this means that some people do not like to hear the music due to the fact that could decrease their work's focus. Secondly, hearing music regularly with earphones could suffer people from hearing problem.
By way of conclusion, music gave more positive impact into social life both personal or community, therefore I strongly recommend that everyone who want explore the music when they are certain ways based on location and time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s to personal and community activities. While the other groups think that tone has tr...
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Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... taken as an instance that implementing a instrumental tone in every staffs room ...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...social life both personal or community. Therefore I strongly recommend that everyone who ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05033557047 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43504185889 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4795865619 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302132663218 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104106694857 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04145000504 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183826513576 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582420531542 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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