Music should not be taught in schools instead other subjects, such as computer and science, should be taught. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The weightage given to different subjects in school curriculum is a tricky business. Many people argue to allot more time for science and technology rather than wasting it on music. In my opinion, although science requires a great amount of time to learn, it is completely not acceptable to overlook music, especially in early learning days of child’s life.
To begin with, music plays a huge role in everybody’s life. The clear evidence is its popularity in human culture right from the early civilization till today where generations have always cherished a good music. Besides, it is a unique medium to express feelings and emotions, which cannot be summarize in human invented languages. Moreover, the interest in music, who knows, can turn in to a successful career in the long run. Additionally, music is quite essential for all-round development because it assists in concentrating and improves focus while pursuing other skills. For instance, based on human brain studies, brain works more efficiently in the presence of music which can trigger certain neuron in brain to enhance focus. Thus, music should be embraced in all the other aspect of life not just school syllabus.
However, computer and technology are considered more vital as it offers better employment opportunities. Learning science is a complex task and it demands a huge commitment as well as effort to understand its complex concepts. Since it has better job security, people, especially parents, prefer their child to emphasize more on these subjects instead of wasting time on music. In other words, it is simply an easy way out because the probability of lending a career in music is considerably less. So, science and technologies are preferred more over Music.
In conclusion, rather than looking only by employment perspective, the importance should be given to complete personality development for the juvenile. Hence, under no circumstances, music can be overlooked but instead a balance should be struck among all the subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30030959752 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96714299348 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59133126935 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6135168066 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.705882353 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206660979848 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662284393146 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726430454904 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128474231313 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807588431141 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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